Illustration and Visual Narrative / Task 3 & Final Project

28.10.2021-25.11.2021(Week 10 - Week 14)
Chang Jia Yee / 0350402 / Bachelor of Design in Creative Media
Illustration and Visual Narrative 
Task 3 & Final Project : Webtoon & Motion Comic



Instruction


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This time, we will be coming up with a HORROR themed comic.


Project requirements:

  • Must be published at webtoons.com

  • Story must have 3-acts structure

  • Min. 30 - Max. 50 panels

  • Illustrations (stick man drawing is not an illustration) can either be coloured or greyscale or screentone shaded render

  • must be PG-13 and SAFE FOR WORK

Required visual file and resolutions (JPG only)

Comic panel (webtoon format) - W800 pxl x H1280 pxl

Example: https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/webtoon-format/list?title_no=109936&page=1


Main Thumbnail size : W436 X H436 pxl

Episode Thumbnail size : W160 X H151 pxl


Task 3 & Final Project : Webtoon & Motion Comic

The theme of this task is horror. Honestly,I seldom watch scary movies and stories, but I think this is a good breakthrough for myself!I'm going to make a suspense horror story. Then there are themed scenes and characters. I'm going to make a Chinese-themed story, briefly describing two adventurous boys who arrive at a different place and then encounter strange things. This is my initial idea and concept.



Initial Webtoon Story

    James and his good friend Sam are camping in the mountains. At night, they camped beside the cave. They accidentally found a beam of light flashing in the cave. Sam insisted on going in to find out. James dissuaded him from it.

    After Sam's entreaties, James decided to accompany him in and have a look. When they entered the cave, they were all stunned. Inside the cave stood a Chinese luxury tavern in the 1980s. The design is very retro, unlike the architectural design of this era. Sam carefully walked to the door, put his ear close to the door, and wanted to listen to the situation inside. There was a lively noise inside, with customers talking and laughing, and the bartender's reception, which was very lively.

    Bold Sam pushed the door open, and it was resplendent and magnificent. The design was like a luxury Chinese hotel in 1980s. The bartender ran out to entertain them enthusiastically, and they naturally let go of their bad feelings. The bartender followed him to the box. Because urgency of micturition
, James asked the bartender where the toilet was, and the bartender offered to take him there. After the bartender and James left, Sam saw a lithe and graceful woman in cheongsam passing by, so he accosted her and invited her to have a drink together. The woman stroked Sam's neck with the silk scarf on her hand, and suddenly strangled Sam's neck. Sam struggled to break free. In the blink of an eye, He found himself tied around his neck with a piece of white cloth, suspended in mid-air. The splendid tavern in front of him instantly turned into a gloomy space. The woman turned into a terrible face, pale, dull eyes, yellow teeth and blood on her face.

    On the way to the toilet, James passed by an altar, and found that there was something strange about the smoke and smell of incense scattered on the altar. When he smelled it close, it was roofies
. The bartender saw that he was going to be exposed, his face suddenly turned pale and blood flowed from his eyes, ready to sneak up on James from behind. James turned around and escaped the bartender's attack, and the bartender fell to the ground. James took the opportunity to escape. James shouted Sam's name as he ran, but got no response.

    James ran back to the original private room and saw Sam hanging in mid-air. James took out his self-defence knife, cut the cloth, and saved Sam who was dying. James lit the lighter, and collapsed Sam asked him why he lit the lighter. James explained that if they go into a place where there are roofies, the smoke of the roofies will cause the lighter go out, so they should be vigilant.

They stumbled out of the tavern and returned to the camping tent. Two people breathed a sigh of relief, two people were injured, lying in the tent and fell asleep. At this time, give the candles in the tent a close-up, and the candles went out. The scene switches to the tavern, where Sam is still hanging there.

…End …

(the end indicates that James are still in hallucination, James haven't actually escaped
. Moreover, Sam beside him is also his illusion. The real Sam is still hanging in the tavern without breathing.)

 In the webtoon, there will be some differences in details between their first entry box and the box where James went in to save Sam, so as to show that what happened in the box where James later went in to save Sam was just his illusion.

 

After writing this initial story, I think this story may be too long, and it will be boring if it is too long. So I asked my lecturer Miss Anis for advice, and she suggested that I delete the last two paragraphs, which might look better. 

Final Webtoon Story

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Fig . Sketch of webtoon

Briefing of Chinese cultural elements appearing in webtoon comic. 
Fig . Chinese door knob 

The auxiliary head ring is a base for holding the door ring installed on the gate. It is a traditional Chinese door decoration, also known as door assistant. Legend has it that Fu Shou is the ninth son of the dragon, who is quiet, alert and good at keeping the door open. The first ring is the knocker, just as the door pin is used to fix the door and the door nail is used to fix the door panel, and the knocker is used to open and close the door and knock on the door. Visitors can tap the auxiliary head with the knocker to make a crisp metallic sound. When the householder hears it, he opens the door to welcome guests.  

Fig . Traditional Chinese Opera

The origin of ancient Chinese opera has a long history. As early as the primitive society, songs and dances had sprouted. In the long development process, after more than 800 years of continuous enrichment, innovation and development, a relatively complete opera art system was gradually formed. Although its origin comes from three different artistic forms: folk songs and dances, rap and burlesque, the biggest feature that distinguishes a drama is that it comes from different vocal systems. These vocals are based on the local languages, folk songs and folk music, and are produced by taking music from other regions. Most of the characters in various dramas are played by different roles with different faces, such as life, beauty, cleanliness and ugliness. In the performance, the emphasis is placed on the use of stylized movements refined based on life and virtual spatial processing. Pay attention to singing, doing, reading, looking for art, performing transportation and being rich in dancing, which is highly technical and constitutes a complete drama art system that is different from other dramas.



Fig . Process in AE (After effect)


Fig . Process in PR (Premiere Pro)


Fig . Create Speckle effect




Final Submission


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Feedback

Specific feedback
Week 12
Remove the last 2 paragraphs, they are kinda flat, instead end the story with both of them end up being permanent residents at the hotel.

Week 13
Looks alright and the flow is nicely.

Reflection
    I think this is the most challenging task of the whole semester. From the conception to the final animation presentation, each one is training me different skills and knowledge. Every link, from conceiving a story to drawing a draft, then to continuous changes later until satisfactory typesetting, then to practice in ai. In this process, there are many different ideas and presentation ways in my mind, which test my logical thinking and creativity, and also my painting skills. The scene of each picture reflects the expression of the characters, and it is necessary to think about how to express it in the least language, so that readers can read the story with their eyes. This is also the part of the whole task where I spend the most time.     There is the process of turning webtoon into motion comic. This is also a great test of my organizational ability and creativity. How to make the still picture lively and interesting, and how to connect it to make the story not dull. This process is very interesting. I really enjoy this step of making animation and adding sound effects, which instantly makes my webtoon better and more advanced.



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